Back to Story

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His burning obsession

"Congratulations on finishing the book so many twists and turns can’t wait for the next one ❤️"

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Great story

"Great story "

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brillant

"excellant book "

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Hooked on the story soo bad !!!!! Perfect soo far ;)

"Interesting as well as Involving:) Loving the plotand writing style;)"

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Very interesting

"Loving the story. Please let us read the story without subscription."

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His burning obsession

"Good story full of excitement. Good for relaxing and to wind down after work. Recommend reading for those that enjoy light reading."

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His Obsession

"Great Story!"

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His burning obsession

"Who is Lola? "

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Good

"Very good so far"

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His Burning Obsession

"Loved the book so far great job author 👏👏👏👏👏"

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Well

"One thing I find extremely annoying, sticking out one's tongue. That is so old and no one does that, even when they did I thought it stupid. The story is fine, but a little unbelievable. "

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The bully

"Rather long but interesting "

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Get ready for waterworks

"Good language actually impressive vocabulary. The plot is nicely coming out but it edging towards a slow burn. I wish the female protagonist could grow some strength and fight off few battles herself than relying on her friends or Lucas"

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Nice

"Jenny is the obsessed one"

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Good story but very aggressive characters

"Jenny character is more aggressive than normal"

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