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So fun! Edge of seat court intrigue!

"I realized that hadn’t left a review yet. Anyone who wants a well written, layered intrigue with the Suspense that demands you get the next chapter RIGHT NOW (lol)... this is a story for you."

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Luna

"This chapter was captivating the atmosphere, tension, and political intrigue were written so vividly. I loved how Kieran’s calm contrasts with the main character’s anxiety. Is there something deeper between Kieran and the protagonist beyond strategy?"

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