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The Dancing Pole

"Good story. Fascinating hole a shy person who had his life turned upside down in such a strange way. Was able to find himself and accept himself and live the life of his dreams with the person he truly loved "

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I am glad Tyler had a good life

"I do not totally agree that Edmund or his kids should have gotten the studio. I think it should have gone to his adopted sister and her children or his dance school friend’s and their children. Edmund lied to him and deceived him and benefited the most. Edmund seduced him and basically raped him into a marriage arrangement to steal his life. Great writing! Thank you for finishing the story."

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