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Great story
"Not sure how I found this story, but I'm glad I did. This story has characters that are funny and you can relate to them. I like that it didn't drag on, it was short and sweet... Well worth the read"
A Hallmark In Storytelling
" If the first 5 chapters of “Magical Christmas” could be described in two words, they would be “magical realism.” It has a real-world setting, but a dream-like feel. It has real-world characters, but they seem to be linked inseparably by fate. Its protagonists display intense emotions, yet contradict themselves by letting go as early as Chapter 5. The POV alternates between the male and female leads. The dialogs are crisp and peppy. The characters — both lead and supporting — are delightfully detailed and well-developed. The backdrop of Christmas is a heartwarming touch. But what truly ... truly takes the cake is the skillful narration. The pace is just right — neither supersonic nor sluggish — and holds the attention of the reader throughout. The plot unravels slowly, one layer at a time. We get to know a bit more about the lead characters in each new chapter, but are left yearning for more. We know what Charlie is running away from, but we don’t get to know why. We know Alex feels a sense of deja vu when he first sees Charlie, but we are not sure why. The narration is a fascinating example of “Show, don’t tell.” And it maintains its momentum throughout. My favorite lines so far: “I can’t escape her familiarity. A flicker of her lingers in the back of my head somewhere, some beautiful phantom that pokes and prods at my memories. It makes me feel senile. I don’t know how I could forget meeting an angel ...” Heartwarming. Immersive. Sensory. Emotional. “Magical Christmas” is a hallmark in good, old-fashioned storytelling. ● Overall Rating: 5 stars ● Plot: 5 stars ● Writing Style: 5 stars ● Grammar and Punctuation: 5 stars"
Absolute instant obsession love
"I absolutly love this book because It is basically an Hallmark christmas movie, that I personally absolute love, and a lot of well written spicy, that I very much appreciate. This book is a perfect combination of love, romance, spicy and a bit of drama. In my opinion the only thing that I will want slightly change is the plot twist drama, in details, the story is well written but with not so much suspence or anticipation of what It is about to happen, in some parts It feels rush. I love the characters, They are captivating and They lure you more into the story, I love their dynamics because They seem real. I like the different POVS. Don't stop writing, you are meant for this. P.s. Forgive my mistakes, English is my second language."
Magical Christmas
"Well written magical Christmas story. I enjoyed reading this book "
Soo Frekin good
"Another amazing story by Alpha. Never disappoints. Alex and Charlie are super adorable. This book had funny moments, emotional moments and also suspenseful ones. Such a good Christmas story and steamy. Recommend if you want a lifetime style story with a lot of spice. "
Magical Christmas
"That was fantastic from beginning to end❤️ What a lasting love they have❤️"
Magical Christmas
"Magical Christmas is — as the title kinda gives away — set in the cheerful and jolly holiday season. A nice young girl called Charlie gets invited by Claus — a wholesome old man who “looks like a skinny Santa, with a shorter beard”— to stay over with his family. As you might expect, his family are welcoming of the girl, his wife and kids, but his eldest son, Alex? Eh, not so much. He doesn’t entertain the idea of Charlie’s presence, to say the least. I don’t get why, to be honest, and neither does he. Guess I’m missing some context. But then he feels that bit of regret. Then they talk. Then they get drunk. Then they get steamy. Yeah, we got a passionate kiss and a blowjob in the first five chapters. Do all erotica authors have that “I know what you’re here for, naughty naughty” sort of storytelling, or is it just you? Anyway, it’s been solid, I guess. Erotica isn’t really my thing, but solid."
Magical Christmas
"This was such a nice, steamy Christmas story. I loved the characters and getting to know them. It was a great read! "
Magical Christmas
"Looking forward to the next chapter. Like the characters. "
