Priority. by Loving at Inkitt
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Summary

A boy who everyday dreams about new people everyday, protects them if he must, or simply, exists.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
7
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter one

"Its raining out."


The clouds cry from above, raining down hard.


"I always love sleeping during the rain, always better than white noise. Time to head to bed."


The boy tucks himself into his blue covered bed.


"Here... It... Goes....."


"Again."


An hour later, the boy is seen flying through mystical seeming colors including golden white, sliver, gold itself, and other variations of color, then, he stops, at-"


"The End, here it is."


The boy walks through.



Someone appears to be sitting on a rock in the middle of a sunflower garden, large and vast.


"Hey! Finally! Someone is here, im wondering what this place is, do you know?"


"It's, the end. The end of all things."


"But this place seems so peaceful.."


"Nobody ever said the end ever had to seem bad, in the end, the end is just a concept."



"Er- Sure!"


"What's your name?"


"It's, Iggy!"


"Interesting, so tell me-"


"?"



"What is your trauma."



"Huh?"


"What is the purpose behind your presence."


"...."


"I- got scared again."


"Again?"


"Yes."


"Parental issues?"


"Yes..."


"How old are you? What's your gender?"


"Female, 14."


"My name, is Eryx."


"Nice to meet you Eryx."


"Thank you."



"Tell me, why does this place exist, Eryx?"



"Not necessarily for any purpose, I come here alot, whenever I see someone I assume they have an issue and if they answer then ofcourse I know. This place is dangerous if you have a trauma however, but I will protect you."



"Oh, I see."


Something in the distance rumbling like a big storm followd in the distance.



"It's the Exotermnator."



"Extermnator?"



"It's here you hurt you, make whatever you have going on worse, to make you more sensitive when you go back, or even kill you in the bed you lay in now."



"Bold of you to assume i'm sleeping in a bed right now, or shelter even."



"I see, well if you are sleeping in a dangerous spot then I will make this quick."



"Running is what you do fast isnt it?"



"How did you know I liked to run?"


"Don't worry about that right now, just, run."


Iggy runs while Eryx takes care of the storm, they hide in a seemingly out of place tower, red with beautiful drawings and depictions of other character, one wearing a hat in a Japanese school outfit, with friends that are blurred out, one with red hair and a green Japanese school outfit, another with swords and things on their waist emitting gas, another, average seeming boy writing in a notebook and other things.



"Does he like to draw?"


Iggy notices a red ballpoint pen sitting on the ground next to him.


"Pretty big for a pen but I mean."



Iggy picks it up.


"It'll work."


Iggy begins to draw something, iggy begins to draw a character from his favorite TV show, depicting a man with a very strange appearance surrounding swans dancing with others.


"There! My inspiration, Clay."


Iggy hears the rumbling of the Exotermnator again, however its too late to run so he hides inside the tower, the Exotermnator passes successfully.



"Whew!"


Iggy hears someone open the door from the downstairs of the tower.



"?"



It's Eryx, however, his eyes are, glowing red.



"Eryx?"


"You."


The person we know as Eryx walks towards iggy, and passes him.


"Ery-"


Eryx's eyes turns back to normal.



"Don't worry, its over, you'll be fine, you just have to leave now, come back when you have no traumas, I dont want to have to protect you again."



Eryx wraps a scarf around Iggy, very quickly too."


"T-thanks.."


"No problem"


Iggy disappears into ash.

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