What is your opinion?
Interesting and intense
"I really like the story itself, although at times I feel like the characters are more complicated than they might seem at first. His behavior toward her is something I’m still a little conflicted about. Sometimes he seems almost obsessed with her, while at other times it feels like he’s taking advantage of the fact that he’s older and more dominant. There are moments when she tells him to stop or makes it clear that she’s uncomfortable, but he doesn’t always listen, which makes me question how much of it she actually wants. That being said, I find the plot really interesting, and the descriptions are detailed and immersive. I also really like the way the story is told, especially the dialogue and the overall dynamic between the characters. It definitely keeps me interested and curious to see where the story goes. "
Frank and Denise
"What a challenge fir a young girl to find out her knicks and the boyfriend is the son of the Daddy? He is so wrong for choosing to be with her 🥺🥺🥺"
Excelent
"Great reading so intense "
Very hot!
"Love the story, it is really well written and very sexy! You should read it!"
Hot and spicy
"I love the plot. So dirty and spicy. But the writing needs a lot of work. Grammar, spelling, sentence structure...they need a lot of work. "
Evocative
"What an evocative and vulnerable story you wrote, Alice. Thank you for sharing your experience with us. The vulnerability reminds me so much of the Story of O, which is not something you find a lot of in today's erotica. So, bravo! Looking forward to more of your adventures!"
Yes, daddy
"The book is shocking about a boy's stepdad engaging in sexually explicit acts with a very young girl then brings in another lady to see how she reacts to this scenario when she decides to start being compliant and calls him daddy. Quite shocking "
Great story of a young woman’s erotic travel
"I love the way the erotic scenes is described - very authentic maybe because they acually happend irl ...? My only critique would be that I miss some better explaining on characters personal feelings, it gets a bit thin with a lot of you need to fill out yourself. I still wonder a lot about Franks relationship to both his son and his wife. How can he do this to them - or is it normal in his marriage? But why would he then need to safe the panties from getting found under the couch? I love that people explore their sexsuality but there has to be some rules you can trust with your partner. So I need there to be some consequences to what they do without their partner’s knowledge..."
Yes Daddy
"I love how vivid and real this is when I read it. Definitely see you going far with being an author :D keep up the good work!"
Yes daddy
"I like the way the author lays out every detail vividly and keeps the story going by giving you just enough detail wirhout taking you the climax. "
Sexy
"I feel like something's missing but so far it's really 🔥"
Dear Alicia
"Your story is truly very touching. You open your heart and soul, and I know how difficult it is when one experiences different things. I therefore encourage you to continue on this path and not to seek to satisfy the norms. Also continue writing, for you have a real talent. You are admirable in every way."
