What is your opinion?
Interesting Start
"The story has an interesting premise, and has a great start. Definitely looking forward to future chapters"
Machinations
"The story is well-crafted and intelligently written. It offers a compelling plot, rich character dynamics, and a thrilling narrative that lingers long after the final page. This story is a must-read and has the potential of being a hit in time."
Machinations
"For just one chapter, it's really good, good enough to leave me excited for the second one! I love the world-building, and the self-made language gives it such a unique feel. The characters feel alive, even without a lot of facial descriptions. The only small issue I have (if you can even call it that) is that it’s a bit hard for me to read. But that might just be me, since I’m doing this as a hobby and don’t consider myself the most intelligent person. Still, I really enjoyed it. "
Please keep writing this!
"I don't leave reviews, but this has me hooked. Please keep writing, I really really want to read Machinations in full. Although I think you might be pitching this to the wrong crowd. Maybe add some smut."
Pretty good
"Pretty good story but could be a bit dense at times."
