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Kudos for writing such a masterpiece

"Kudos for writing such a masterpiece. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at cbdoungd876 AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

Brutal honesty

"I liked where you were going with the whole story, I couldn't handle all the grammar mistakes though. The style of wringing is nice I can nod along and smile with it. However, there are some major flaws. The characters attitudes don't stay the same through out the story. Not to be confused with development, when they act one way one second then completely change how they act in the next paragraph I got confused on how I should portray the character as a whole. Not to be wronged, the story still impressed my with the plot and the story. I was able to follow it, they played it out in short so it didn't take chapters to get what the characters were doing and why they were doing what they did. I'm happy you made your story, and I hope you find this helpful for any future stories. (once again, these were solely my opinion and you may disregard everything in your own right.)"

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