Chapter lv

"The story was so long, had too many characters & plots. I missed a great deal of the story because I skipped over some long parts. By the end I didn’t recognize who was the Good Guys! I finally just kept reading to see how the story ended. I usually like to know what happened to the characters good & bad but just settled for the ending. I think the author storylines are great just too many side stories to keep up with, Ex Mavert takes over a body you then tell me info about them that doesn’t have much to do with the REAL STORYLINE."