A bit like me

"For the rating: plot -> up to here it sounds a bit more like a statement than actual action, so I kind of have to judge randomly... The theme is one I have experinced though, thus I am kind of sensible to it. I know I didn't feel that way about it though. You have a good writing style, there just nothing particuarly special about it (or so I think). It's, as I said, a bit like a statement, without much connotation behind it. But the style will develop as the story goes on anyway, so... For the writing skills, there is just one mistake: 'my live' that I noticed, so... Good luck writing on"