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What is your opinion?
Author review
"I mean what type of Author doesn't review their own book. So I give it 5 stars, I might be biased but I like my story alot."
Intriguing
"This was intriguing, I really had to concentrate to get through it, which I don’t like, I struggled to understand what was going on, but I also recognise this could be Intentional, showing the state of confusion of the character. I would recommend more showing and not telling, also more character driven work this seems more plot driven and if it was written to show the confusion of the character we need to be shown more of it, to make it make sense. I can’t wait to see what happens going forward as the creativity is something I would enjoy. "
