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Their pact ties

"Great work."

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Their pact ties

"One of the best books I've read so far can't wait to read more from this author"

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Such an intriguing werewolf novel!!

"I absolutely adored this book! I couldn't stop reading once I started which says a lot about the compelling plot and characters of this novel. I wasn't too sure about Jasmine's love interests at first...Devin seemed too perfect and Cage, *whew* that boy seemed like a complete a-hole in the beginning. He definitely grew on me and so did Devin. I loved Jasmine! She was so real and I could feel Jasmine's anguish over the choices (or lack of) that she had. I love how the relationships developed in this story. I love, love, looovvvvveeed the friendships as well. Nicole and Terrick are THE BEST friends anyone could ask for. What a beautiful and wonderful werewolf romance that had an excellent thriller twist. If I could make one suggestion to the wonderful and amazing author (or maybe two...) when/if you decide to edit this novel I think you could do well with showing rather than telling. There were a lot of things happening that you told us readers about but we didn't actually get to see it. For instance, there were a few times when Jasmine was ambushed or attacked and I would have LOVED to see it, understand her emotions when it happened and see her fight her attackers instead of being told what happened. There were also times when I would have loved to see Cage's reactions in certain situations instead of being told how he reacted. I would also love to see more dialogue in this story, you have plenty of room to use more dialogue if you wish and I think that would flesh out the story more. As well as some descriptions of characters, I had a hard time visualising Cage and Jasmine until the end of the story. I kept referring to the cover to get a sense of what they looked like. If that was done deliberately then please ignore me 😅 Besides those things, I think you have an amazing story here. It grabbed me right from the start. I loved the relationships, the friendships, the pack relations, the built up tension between Jasmine and Cage! oo, yes!! I loved everything. I can't wait to read more from you and I hope there will be a sequel to this! You're a fantastic writer and you've definitely got something amazing with this novel. Well done!!"

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Betrayed

"Ashley is a very vile person and her evil plan with Mason,Chelsea and the others is unfortunately against all their packs and not a selected few."

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Their Pact Ties

"This was an interesting read. I thought that we would find out what happened to Mason in the end. The characters were charming and the story was easy to follow. "

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