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Good storyline

"Good plot. Characters are good. Lena is being kind of a B especially when she knows her husband was under a spell. Hope she figures it out soon."

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Bring back Dr Luna

"I can ALREADY SEE this is going to be a drawn out mess, the plot progresses slowly and is disjointed. AND the grammatical errors are horrible, it’s already my pet peeve meaning the glare out at me. Plus I paid 2.00 for a half a** half finished plodder….."

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Where's the rest of the book?

"How is this the ending???"

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