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Beresford Empire

"This is amazing. I loved everything; the plot wist, the spicy scenes, the dialogue. Its was captivating. The characters are so real and so are their personalities. I love it."

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Empire

"What an incredible story😍😍😍😍 Loved the characters so much very well written Daniel is 😍😍 Lina is exhausting, lily and elo are great people to have as friends As I move to book 2 can't hold in my enthusiasm Thanks😘😘"

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I love a great book

"Oh I’m so glad you brought this book to my attention x I absolutely loved it! Couldn’t put it down . Now at the end and what’s happened I’m so emotional - you do know this affects my day - I really LIVE these stories I FEEL them and that’s all down to your good writing girl. Well done! (I know at the back of my mind what is probably gonna happen BUT never to ME so hence for a while I’m living Lina’s life so I’m away to talk to mum!) See ya in the next book 👋"

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Omg

"Thank you for recommending this story to me. I loved it. Going to start book2 today. I was pulled in to this story. I like the characters. I love Daniel. I hope Lina comes around. Love to see the look on Claire's face. I do not think Daniel would request an abortion. I hope it is not Tom's baby. I better start book2 now."

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Love it

"Thanks for reaching out for me to read this book. Really like it. although sometimes I get really angry with daniel and how re handles things. I know Asperger’s are different, but he never seems to talk clearly to Lina. And don’t know if it was the translate, but sometimes I was confused about the “” and the italic phrases. Over all I’m anxious to read book 2 and really like it because the characters seams real. "

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A seriously good read

"The story was there, Lots of background and characterisation was there. Very well written, I tried to take my time with it as I was enjoying the book so much I cannot wait for book two to see what happens next "

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A Little Bit Different Office Romance ;)

"Really enjoyed this one story, especially when chatacters are well written and manage to seem like they could be real life people with their strenghts, weaknesses and insecurities. Absolutely love how story unravels and that characters are staying true to themselves and acting logically according to their nature. Really looking forward to the book 2, just personally need to wait a little bit more chapters to be published as I personally as a reader like to binge books and series in one go! 10/10 🌟🌟🌟"

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CEO Suspense

" Lots of suspense with twists. Great writing "

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CEO Suspense

" Lots of suspense with twists. Great writing "

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Beresford Empire

"Very good book. Wonder who the Daddy is"

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Part 2

"I was interested in reading part two where can I find it"

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Great story ❤️

"I loved the volume 1 and so looking forward to the volume 2. Thank you for sharing with your readers. "

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Looking for your next read? I 100% recommend

"I love this slow burn office drama. Can't wait for more updates to book 2 To the writer I love it keep on 💕"

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Great book

"Great book "

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The Beresford Empire Part 1

"I am thoroughly enjoying the story so far. Great writing! Witty! Looking forward to reading more. "

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Middle child

"I think the character is very relatable. Can’t wait to see how her situation turns out. Hope the rich guy offers her that job!"

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Bien I guess

"Es como que no le pude agarrar cariño a ningún personaje, veremos en el segundo libro"

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Voller überraschender Wendungen

"Ich finde es mutig eine Hauptfigur zu wählen, die so unsicher und ängstlich ist. Aber auch wichtig. Du setzt das gut um. Auch, wenn Linas Unsicherheit manchmal etwas nervig ist, besonders wenn sie gesagt bekommt, dass sie etwas gut macht, aber das muss Nerven,damit man sie versteht. Die Handlung gefällt mir. Sie hat überraschende Wendungen, die sie von anderen Geschichten klar abhebt. Ich finde den Anfang etwas zäh und holprig im Schreibstil und musste mich etwas durchquälen, aber dann wird dein Stil deutlich flüssiger, spannender und weniger beschreibend. Auf jeden Fall eine lohnende Geschichte. Danke für deinen Hinweis auf die Geschichte. "

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Beresford's Empire

"The beginning was slow but the pace picks up and becomes intriguing. The female protagonist was annoying at first but the character reflects real life. I like the growth of her character and look forward to her emergence. I like the male protagonist a lot...sure of himself and knows what he wants. I look forward to a beautiful ending. Good to recommend to friends."

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A good story a bit different

"A good story quite a lot of details about the office work some of it goes over ur head I like that it’s different in so many ways but kind of same "

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