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Cold as Ice Hot as Hell

"I don’t know how I feel about this one. I couldn’t figure out who was in a relationship with who. Did she have any feelings that weren’t sexually motivated ?"

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Confusing

"I rarely write bad reviews because I can usually find something good to say about a book. Unfortunately, I made it about halfway through and am so confused, I'm not sure which way is up. I hope you keep writing, but I'd suggest outlining your story a little better with a clearer plot. Halfway through, and I'm still not sure what the plot of the story was. I will say i didn't notice any grammer or spelling mistakes so far, which i can't say about most of the books on here. Good luck with future books. "

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Good ,short and left me hanging

"Nice book but short . Seems to be missing an ending. "

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Confused....

"I'm sorry but I really didn't enjoy that. It all seemed kind of pointless to me. Basically she was full of herself and loved any attention she could get. She slept around and kept fucking the dude who treated her like shit who has a girlfriend... At least I think he still did that wasn't very clear.... And even after he gave her hiv or might have she still went back for more then suddenly decided to run away from her life because the coach that she was flirting with was showing interest ... ??? "

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