What is your opinion?
Nice plot
"The story is nice, such a different contrast to most stories, main character is a mean girl, rich, has a huge friend group. it is definitely worth reading"
Not my cup of tea, BUT
"I’m not one to bash on others work. But I am one to critique it. Now, granted I’m not a romance writer of any kind 👀 but the author kindly asked if I could give it a whirl and give any feedback. So here it is. The plot can be seen as divided into two parts. I’m not gonna spoil it, but where it leaves off right now at chapter 2, you’ll see what I’m talking about. The main character is very self centered, possibly a narcissist—low key. We don’t know too much about the characters just yet. Bread crumbs are being spread as the chapters are being released. I am curious as to how these relationships progress or digress. Now, the grammar could use a lot of work. I’m not perfect when I write either, that’s why I use an editing tool to help me excel at what I suck at the most which is GRAMMAR. I highly recommend using any type of editing tool as it will help your flow which, in turn helps the reader. "
