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Entangled Strings of Fate

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Summary

I grew up believing love was gentle. My parents’ devotion to each other felt unshakable—something pure, something eternal. I was wrong. When circumstances tore my family apart, I learned how easily love can curdle into obsession, how devotion can become a weapon. I paid the price for choices I never made, trapped in the aftermath of someone else’s unchecked desire. Now, isolated and surrounded by strangers, I am forced to question everything: Who is telling the truth? Who is protecting me—and who is controlling me? As secrets surface and loyalty becomes impossible to measure, I must decide whether survival means obedience… or resistance. Somewhere between fear and hope, I am still searching for a way home—if home even exists anymore.

Status
6mo ago
Chapters
30
Rating
5.0 (3 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

IT’S ALL YOUR FAULT... MOM!

Why did you ever love someone like him?

Why did you let yourself get entangled in his world?

If you hadn’t made that choice, our lives would have been different.

I would have been there—with you. With all of you.

I could have been an artist, just like you.

Instead, your art became the spark that destroyed everything—for me… for us.

I keep asking myself—why did it all have to unfold this way?

Why am I the one left to bear the consequences?

Why am I the one standing here, alone, asking questions no one will ever answer?

I might never see you again.

Or Dad.

Or my brother.

Or anyone I ever loved.

If not for that day, seven years ago... our lives could have been perfect.


Perched on the edge of a rugged cliff, Claire stared out at the ocean as waves crashed violently against the rocks below.

The wind tore through her hair, but it did nothing to lift the weight pressing against her chest.

The path behind her was gone.

The future ahead felt just as unreachable.

And somewhere between the two… everything had fallen apart.

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