45 chapters read
perdi
"Interesting story. Although the change of the mafia Don into a hands on father changing dirty diapers sounds a bit unreal. "
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48 chapters read
Hush darling don't say a word
"I really enjoyed this story. I'm glad Aria forgave Aloha for being with her father.Not too sure about them getting out of the mafia, though that's gonna be a good book, too read how they manage that."
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37 chapters read
5 star
"Love Love Love Love I absolutely love the story I love the way it is played out how much detail is given fantastic "
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48 chapters read
Love it!
"Great story now I can’t wait for the next! ♥️"
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50 chapters read
Hush Darling don’t say a word
"I really enjoyed the story. It got a little confusing at times but I still liked the plot. I’m looking forward to the next book. "
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44 chapters read
Familiar
"I feel like I have read this story before. Maybe I have and just didn't and it to my lists. I will know for sure when I finish it. FBI or CIA will let me know for sure."
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40 chapters read
The Mafia
"Spicy, gripping, traumatic"
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38 chapters read
Jceejf
"Rcecef fece cecece scsc free cecv rveg egg veges "
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49 chapters read
Nice story, wrong intro
"The story is not so bad, the dynamic between main characters is interesting and shows development. But in my opinion the intro does not correspond to the story. I did not think Alora was at any point lying or coming to beg for help. So I would recommend writing a new intro."
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