Inkitt
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Arlene

"Very much like this story"

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Good read

"This story definitely can keep you on your toes. It also finds you rooting for the main character "

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If it’s working let it be !

"I’ll be frank I only read it because of the only review that was on was so cruel , simply putting one stars which after finishing reading it I could see that person didn’t read it all and simply decided to put a bad review, which I find stupid and free criticism for the author hard work. Yes the story is fast paced but most of MC book are since those boy always fall fast ya know 😉 I liked the Fmc characters and completely understand where her hard personality came from . Frankly at the start I hated the Mmc 😂 so damn bad but then I absolutely loved them together and there bickering. Didn’t see at all some twist you did good 👍. Loved how Raw there love was too and the Spicy scene 🔥🫣. I would recommend to people , but if you don’t like faster pace either don’t read it or just don’t leave nasty comment just because it ain’t ya style."

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cant finish

"unfortunately not a fan of this writing style. too rushed in certain areas and not invested enough in the characters to continue. found fmc to be too argumentative, defensive, and annoying. mmc is rude, childish, and pompous. "

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