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Raw and Emotional -- by the Author

"Readers who will delve into Jade Peterson's life, will actually relate it to themselves a lot more. More character driven with a good plot tying every arc into one big narrative. That's all for now, No Spoilers ha !:)"

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This is gonna be Epic!

"Waiting for the season to begin! The mystery genre should be explored more on inkitt. WHere are you all guys! "

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I can’t wait for more.

"Loving the premise, been waiting for this. I have been very critical with the inline comments, I hope this doesn’t put you off, this is just me trying to help you be the best writer you can be. At the same time I am aware how overwhelming and soul destroying it can be, know this isn’t a criticism of you this a way to help you learn. Can’t wait to read the next bit. "

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