What is your opinion?
A great read!
"An isekai-ed MC+ op powers+ great world building + fantasy+ fun characters. All the ingredients to create a fun crazy and gripping story! The story is brilliantly crafted!!✨✨ I love the plot of this novel and I zipped through the chapters far too quickly. Now I gotta wait🙈"
Awesome Sauce!
"This is totally amazing! Just what I've been looking for! Well done!"
Amazing story
"I have read each chapter loved each character, hoped and wished for more. It has been a wonderful journey reading I truly enjoyed it"
Reincarnated into a failed marriage
"It's simply an amazing book multiple mysteries absolutely would recommend it to an Isekai anime book worm and the writer really knows how to make us envision the scene I'm currently writing a book myself and this book gave me fresh ideas"
Some very good ideas, but some plot polish would be good
"I enjoyed reading the story, currently up to Ch 37. I have a concern with the plotting of the story, but there's good in it too. I plan to continue for the present. I like the concept of a struggling isekai character, blamed for awful deeds done by the shit who formerly owned his body. I also like most of the supporting cast, who think they are dealing with the same shit. The writing itself is basically clear, and spelling is satisfactory. Sometimes present tense is used in the narration, when it should be past. The use of bold text in the ordinary narration doesn't really add value. A few plot points, which might be picked up by a couple of small re-writes - - I am concerned that the MC got over-powered too fast. Ultimately, Superman stories become boring quickly - it's why DC Comics invented kryptonite decades ago. If there's little risk and no power limit, there's no story. (Maybe this should be linked in with the following comment about Ivy.) - I like the character of Ivy, and the strong hints at who she is. However, it's not clear what she is doing, other than comic relief. I feel that she was intended to drive the story more, not just jeer at him and sling a bunch of rewards every few chapters. There seems to be an under-developed storyline here, and Ivy is a good character who deserves more. - Callista is too much of a slut parody. To avoid spoilers, let's just say the big confrontation between him and her is not realistic. She's clearly an intelligent lady with certain tastes. But an intelligent billionaire would not do that in front of a major business and social rival (and in front of servants). If the scene must occur, it should be a private one between him and Callista. It could create a further misunderstanding with Seraphina... - The first meeting with Thorin is problematic. He's too important to be lurking in a wood outside Arkwright Manor. Did he miss his ride home? It needs a clear reason why he's there - maybe as a business guest of the Arkwrights? One of their creditors? [Or did Ivy do something ...?] - I'm uncomfortable about how he monetises his "inventions". Thorin is well capable of stealing all of them - he clearly understands the principles quickly. It is far more likely that he would pay for access to future plans, and the right to sell them or the resulting products. Unless some kind of international patent system exists, the ideas are not protected once they are shared. They are not worth buying for absurd sums. Having said all that, there is a good story under all of this, with good ideas. I have been happy to read to date. "
