What is your opinion?
3 Chapters in ..im hooked😍
"I've only read 3 Chapters of the novel after seeing a snippet on reddit....and im hooked. I had to download the app and save it. The characters are so well written that i can almost imagine them ..and the descriptions are so realistic sounding. I feel like I've walked in the book. Anastasia's beauty is so well said and Dominic's swagger....chef's kiss. Not to mention the...uhm.....hot spicy scene at chapter 1.....i already know what to look forward to.🥵🥵🥵 This is tagged erotica so i hope we'll be getting more of those scenes cause they are hawwwtttt... The writing style is legit, the grammer, pacing, everything....just worth the read. Definitely recommend"
Illicit Hostage
"This story has a heartfelt beginning, with emotional depth and intriguing tension between the characters. The author clearly cares about their world and characters, which shines through beautifully. That said, the writing leans a bit more on telling rather than showing. While this helps us understand the characters, it sometimes slows down the pace. With more vivid actions and natural dialogue, the emotions could feel even more powerful and immersive. Still, this is a strong start with real potential. With some polishing, this story could truly shine. Keep writing—you’re on the right path! I recommend this story to readers who enjoy slow-burn emotional journeys with the promise of heartfelt romance that lingers beyond the page"
