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Not Broken Just Bruised

"Great story unfolding, looking forward to reading more. Punctuation and grammar is very good, I would love to see some more connections and conversations between Royce and Crystal, and would look forward to reading more from this author. Keep up the great work! "

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Not broken Just Bruised

"Emotional, heart loving story about the young who struggled to understand the depths of their emotions. Characters were strong presented. Plots was enough. Well done"

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Not Broken, Just Bruised

"I am currently 12 chapters in, and I am quite enjoying this novel. The author brilliantly weaves a tale about teenage angst and insecurities. Both of the main characters are lonely and feeling lost. The FL's family moves and she tries to make a place for herself in a new school where everyone knows everyone else. The ML comes from a broken home. He lives with his father who is hard on him and makes him feel he isn't good enough by always comparing him to his older brother, and finding him (ML) lacking. "

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Not broken, just bruised.

"Although not yet finished (prologue and first 10 chapters) Mystie_Peanut knows well how to capture teenage doubts in words. In every chapter you feel their longing to be seen, recognized. I trust the following chapters will read equally smooth."

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