Nice to read a raw story 😉... It feels like I live in my 20s again after reading it because what ever you wrote is a baby mind with brilliant work 😄 great job keep it up one day you will be a good writer

"I like the short story idea that everything is kept on going no breaks.... What, I don't like the ending but it's okay lily also needs a frame.... I would recommend this work to freebies to not give up on their starting journey of becoming a writer... I am giving a 5 star rating because I write this story 🥺😭 i reviewing this by my account that I make by mistake "