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Memories of Smoke

"Wow! I've read several of your books and there's no doubt you're a very good writer but this one blew me away. Writing a thriller is no small feat and infusing with psychological elements is on another level but you pulled it off perfectly. The suspense, twists and turns and engaging characters kept me hooked from begining to end. Its my belief that it will make a grrat TV series or a feature. It really is that good. Well done. Great job 👍"

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Love this book!

"Wow! Just wow! That was a crazy ride! I love your writing style. The evolving of the characters was great. Suspenseful and high adrenaline, tears and good humor. This book has everything! Looking forward to more of your books. ❤️"

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Memories of smoke

"This story is heartwarming and a mystery. The characters are outstanding. The writing is amazing. This is a must read, and I highly recommend it. 🎉❤️"

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Compelling story

"This is one of those stories that keeps you turning pages without realizing how much time has passed. The plot was gripping and constantly kept me on edge, and just when I thought I had everything figured out, something would change and catch me off guard. The mystery was handled really well, with just enough clues to keep me guessing without giving too much away. Overall, it was a compelling read that I enjoyed a lot."

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Great writing

"Love the suspense and the gradual unraveling of the mystery "

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Go read this book now!!!!

"It has been a roller coster journey from the start to the end... the story had kept me on my toes from the start and it had been very difficult to stop and take a break from reading continuously... The author's writing and the way the plot works without leaving any loopholes between the past and the present along with the way she had kept the suspense is top tier... It's been a while since I have read such a book and its a must read "

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Intrigued

"Loved the word play. The way you illustrated how predators manipulate others by using their weaknesses and insecurities. "

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Memories Of Smoke (Continuous Suspense and Mind-blowing Plot Twists)

"WOW! 👏🏻 This book represents a remarkable story that I wouldn't have expected to be such an amazing compound of continuous suspense, great action, a large amount of psychology with emotional damage and healing, slow-burn romance, and subtle hints about characters' personalities, which end up as various mind-blowing plot twists the closer you reach the end. 🤯 There is nothing negative I could say about this unique storyline, written with a splendid style. The descriptions in the dialogues create the perfect effect, keeping me hooked through each chapter. No wonder this book is a First Place Winner of Inkitt's 2025 Mystery & Suspense Competition, it has every right to be! ✨ Thank you, author, for sharing your outstanding work with us! 🫶🏻"

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Really loved this book

"This book has it all, intrigue, love, abuse, deception, suspense, suspicion, lying, betrayal and so much more. This one will keep you guessing and at the end you will have all the pieces to pull it all together. Give this one a read I’m sure you will love it!!!"

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Love it

"I am not a fond of mystery genre but I am truly love this one. It kept me guessing what the plot, and it is truly surprising in the end.. I thought Parker is the bad guy.. but i never suspect that plot twist. "

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Memories of Smoke

"Enjoy reading.."

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Amazing

"I loved this story! The suspense as Aspen's story unfolds over time had me hooked the whole way through. "

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Good read, suspenseful

"I keep thinking I have worked it out... so I look forward to finding out."

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Needs work

"I love an ambitious storyline, but it must be matched with ambitious writing, and unfortunately here the writing falls short. The prose is stilted, the vocabulary repetitive, the main characters undeveloped, the minor characters too numerous, the dialogue syntactically awkward. Also, why set this in California when the author is clearly from another country? This easily could take place in Britain, Singapore, Australia... This could potentially be an interesting, mysterious story after a few more drafts and research. "

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