What is your opinion?
The Games We Play
"The first chapter catches you and pulls you in. It is suspenseful and compelling all the way to the end. This is a story I want to read until the end."
Hooked!
"This first chapter is amazing! I was immediately immersed and I'm eager to find out what happens next! Your writing style is amazing. Aspen is so well written, I felt instantly connected to her, and the way her surroundings are described I felt like I was right there! ☺️ "
I'm almost sweaty after completing the first chapter
"Okay so this was only the FIRST chapter and I'm already on the edge of my seat. The hard working protagonist with a very clear goal and compelling backstory really captured me. I felt for her as soon as she was introduced. The amount of detail you put into describing her surroundings and the people she encountered really made it all seem so alive and realistic, without it being overwhelming or distracting. Key to emmerging your readers, which you did fantastically. Personally I'm usually more drawn to fantasy, sci-fi or historical stories, but this might just have changed my mind. I can't wait to see what comes next and I'm hoping you don't let your fingers rest for too long. Sending all my best wishes to you and your story!"
