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Great novel

"Enthralling, touching with a deep personal flair. I think the novel is simply great."

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Drama

"This shows how easy saying and doing something can have long lasting consequences for both parties involved. A lot of growing up, being honest and not giving up got this adorable absolute perfect couple back together!"

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L u na

"Good fun read, erotic at times, great characters "

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Loved

"I saw a few complants saying they hate the MC but I loved the story. Everone makes mistakes especially at the age of 16. Both main characters had selfish moments. They are human. It made me feel for the characters. Very well written. Another great book for the series. "

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Lovely and refreshing story set in contemporary times

"This was such a fun and engaging read. Only in the last few chapters are there some typos. But the entirely of the story and writing style are captivating, consistent, and well done. I love the strong female leads with an equally strong, steadfast mate. Such a wonderful love story. This one made my heart so happy. "

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A heartfelt read

"I loved the character development throughout the story. I love the perfect balance of power dynamic between the pov's and the witty back and forth. Great writing, minimal grammatical errors, and a wholesome conclusion. I am looking forward to reading her other titles."

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Ember - the Untamable Luna

"I never thought about the real reason for her pain! It was a very interesting story! I liked ot a lot!"

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Light refreshingly

"Niee and light not like other werewolf books have read. Where someone trying to kill each other. Love the girl power too "

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Ember-the untamable luna

"Absolutely loved the story. "

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Good Series

"I have read every book in this series. I like them all. I think they all have good plots with a little twist the reader never sees coming. My problem with this book and the one with Emma is the Alpha and the pack name is the same, so a reader like we that read all your books might be confused. Despite that, I think your writing was well put together, everything flowed well and this book had an awesome love story. Good job, keep up the good work. "

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Help

"Why does it say 101/108 at the top but I cant read thw next chapters?? Any help please! "

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Ember - the untameable luna

"Great story, it made me cry quite a few times"

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Interesting

"Love the book"

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LOVE YOU ALL

"Hi everyone! This is the first part of Ember’s story. This Luna is untamable, strong-willed, sassy, and absolutely unstoppable. If you’re into fierce heroines, snappy dialogue, and a fast-paced, addictive read… this one’s for you! I promise plot twists, emotional highs, and jaw-dropping turns at every chapter. I had so much fun writing it. Please check it out, enjoy the ride, and let me know what you think! As always, any feedback is welcome and as always… LOVE YOU ALL! ❤️ Eleanor MOON"

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Heartbroken Luna

"This story began with teenage heartbreak between teenagers. In the way of description of wouldbe young lovers still called children i find demeaning. But it sets the tone for the entire story. The heartbreak set within the story,to nearly the end, when finally the Alpha really steps in...I am so glad he did. He finally realized he had to do the adult thing,use his aura, to break through the hard walls. The story has triggers of immense sadness, depression... not recommended for under 25yo. "

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Really good

"Great writing flow. Author knows how to tell a story. "

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Not All Wars Are Physical

"I like how this author can write different variations in storylines while maintaining the same genre. There is a lot of action in this book but not the typical physical conflicts and/or battles between packs. The Untamable Luna is the perfect title as the luna here has a LOT of growing and maturing to do. Her feelings of 'entitlement' have consequences which lead to more bad choices... and some choices are forever, they can't be undone. Expect a lot of emotional drama and insecurities, anticipate frustration, all the while seeing change happen."

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Ember

"Plot of the story is nice, a bit different, which I like, although I think Ember is unreasonable, but I am not fond of the constant enumerations. "

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Ok story

"Well she is the most selfish one of them all at the moment(in the series). Sam, Carter, Lilly and Logan had me since they were first mentioned. Even when Logan made a mistake he made up for it since the first moment he realize what she was to him. But her wining, complaining and acting as the victim through the story made me dislike her with passion. How dare she let everyone believe it was all his fault. She was selfish, coward and dishonest with everyone including her self. Even though I knew they were end game I kinda wish he would have made her work for his forgiveness and love just like he did for hers. She was handed everything in a silver plater and still acted immature throughout the whole story. Sorry for the low star rating. But I couldn’t get pass the fc at all. It was frustrating to no end. "

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