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Good

"3"

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Picksey

"Enjoying so far "

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Good story

"Enjoyed every chapter "

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Full if twists

"Really good story so fat"

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Don's obsession

"At war with myself on this one.wanted her to have more spirit in her found her a bit to meek.enjoyed reading it "

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highly recomded

"highly recomed great suspense"

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Don's Obsession is gold

"This was absolutely awesome! I read a lot if mafia boss getting obsessed and the we find out he's soft and kind on the inside, but Salvatore and Isabella felt so REAL. Thank you for this incredible expirience."

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Gave Me Feelings

"Ill be really honest, i really loved this book. the writing and the plot was amazing. tho i could feel the ending was a bit rushed..i completely understand from the authors pov as i myself dont like a sad endings. but overall this book deserves 5 stars. amazing book author!"

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Something missing?

"I enjoyed this and would recommend. I only wish there was maybe more development of how salvatore grew to love her. It seemed a little wham bam at the end. Please change ‘leonardo is short for leo’ it’s the other way around ‘Leo is short for leonardo’. "

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Don’s Obsession

"I just wish there had been a couple tender moments throughout the book then I would I would have felt he was redeemable somewhat or the love plausible, but other than the apology at the end; he was nothing but an emotionless monster. She was nothing but an incubator and slave. Though I love my stories heart wrenching, so author you do have skills ngl."

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Don’s Obsession

"I don’t know about this story. I guess I am not sure if it should be have ended the way it did. He didn’t deserve to have a chance for a happy e."

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It's ok

"Basic read nothing impressive very rushed "

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The story is too fake

"I dislike the plot of the story"

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