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Intensely Satisfying

"Some things felt rushed, but not inappropriately so. The plot is intense and wish there was more. As well as longer 🌶️ scenes. I have very much enjoyed it thus far!"

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highly recommended reading!

"I really enjoyed reading this novel. I love diplomatic conflicts accompanied by betrayals, with romance as the main plot. The characters are realistic, and their actions fit well with their motivations. The novel is beautifully written, and the pace is steady but not rushed; the whole thing feels natural and well-crafted. I was amazed by the subtle details of the different cultures revealed as the story progressed. Especially the meaning of certain words or the rituals performed during certain ceremonies. Plus, the way everything is incorporated into the scenes and dialogue is so beautiful and perfect... It's a shame there aren't more chapters because I devoured it in no time! Magnificent work, author, congratulations!"

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Great short story

"Wish there was more. Great story. "

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Amazingg

"One of the best stories I ever read. Read this NOW. Writing style is immaculate and you don’t get bored."

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Emotional Romance and Revenge!

"I am so excited to see this story unfold! Cassie's writing truly pulls at your heart strings. The worldbuilding is so well developed and the language! Just wow! So exciting. Everything you are looking for in a high fantasy setting :) "

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Nice story

"This is a nice story. Loved while reading it."

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