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2nd book

"When will book 2 be out can't wait to start reading it "

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Lucien

"Great story, the ending was a great surprise. I will wait for book 2"

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Lucien

"Really enjoyed this amazing story 😊 so glad she left to find a life or even a lover…. Plz do a book 2 … thank you author 👏👏👏"

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Buffy reborn

"Good first book. It defined the characters well, established the guidelines for the world it exists in and the plot flowed pretty well. Only one criticism, previously mentioned in a chapter. The guidelines for this world say that the Government has an existing treaty with the supernatural world. So when the lead female character is sold to the Leader of the Vampire coven, even though she escapes from captivity, she has to be given to them. However, her brothers are wolves, Beta's of her pack. Under those rules she cannot be sold to the Coven as she is protected via the Supernatural treaty. As we got to the end of the first book, some of the underlying issues were addressed. I hope more of the world and the issues therein are addressed. "

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Nice

"Het is een leuk boek ,niet al te dramatisch. De autor heb hetcgoed gedaan"

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Great story

"I really like the female lead. I like how strong she is. I like her female friends and how she bonds with them. The love interest is sexy and a bit complicated. His friends are great as well."

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Lucian

"Can’t wait to see what happens next in this absolute cliff hanger of a story!!"

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Lucian

"LOVE IT!! NEED MORE!!!"

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Interesting

"I am totally enjoying this storyline. The emotional interaction between the two main characters is interesting and entertaining. It keeps the reader wondering, what next 🤔 I know I'm all in. "

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