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This story is SO good!

"The MMLC's personalities mesh so well together! Their relationship is so cute and heartwarming. I definitely read it all in one go. 😊 Consider me obsessed with this story. Keep up with the amazing work! 🖤"

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Very Good Reading

"I absolutely loved this story. Made me wish I was a young boy with my own "set" of daddies. Boy do I miss the cuddles, warmth and soft lips! Just miss being with someone...."

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Daddy's boy

"This story was too good I can't say anymore 😪 I wanted to read more!!!!"

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Daddy’s boy (m m)

"Max is so good and 2 him n I hope they catch his ex "

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Daddy's boy

"Really enjoying the story 😎👍🖤💜🖤🖤"

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Daddy's Boy

"Axfinslly found his "one." Im also glad he and Avery connected like they did. We still need to find out if Jamie and Julian get back together, but now I also wanna hear more about Danny. He needs to find the "one" too. "

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Daddy's boy

"I love books like these differ from the usual norm, I recommended it to some reading friends"

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Daddy's boy

"It's really so amazingly beautiful and awesome as seeing how love and mutual understanding and communication as well as caring and supportive of one another 💗 I really loved and respected how Max really loved Avery and with his love and compassion and supportive to heal Avery ❤️ get through his trauma ❤️ "

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Tayf

"İts moving smoothky qnd iş enjoyabke"

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Love

"I wish the chapters were longer, but I'm hooked "

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Love has no Boundaries

"This has been a story of the struggles a young man has of trying to leave his past behind. I have greatly enjoyed and appreciated the author’s writing of this intriguing and suspenseful story. Couldn’t put the story down hopeful that there would a happy ending. Congratulations to the writer for a very compelling story line and allowing us to read the story. This is a must read. I very much hope that this is not the end of the story and that there will be updates to this story about Avery and Max & Danny and Kaiden. Loved the story so far ⭐️💕🫶🏼😊"

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Interesting

" So far keep me thinking what's next to your writing 😇"

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What I thought

"I liked how the main characters are always there for each other. I would also tell everyone to read it."

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Such patience

"You write so well. Not sure if I like the Daddy references but guess his father must have been there for him as a child. Didn’t want to wait for him to take so long coming out of his mental breakdown. Just hope that he stays mentally healthy for Max ."

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Good story

"A good story focused on the characters not just sex. It was a little short though, I mean what came of Danny and Kaidens relationship?, what about Ryan, the jealous sub, I really thought he'd play a bigger part. And Julian, Maxs friend, what about a new love for him?. It was great, I enjoyed it but it did cut off rather short I felt."

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Breathtaking& heartfelt!

"So emotional, honest and inspiring!"

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Warm

"Very warm and comforting "

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Good so far

"Cute and interesting plot , but a bit slow , I like the characters and their personality, would like to know more about danny and his life too , let's see how the story goes ahead"

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Captured

"It was a good read. However, it ended too soon.."

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Good but slow moving

"Good but slow moving "

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