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I was hooked from the start

"The writing in this story is flawless. It is concise, convey's emotions, places the reader in the scene and keeps you glued to the story- constantly wondering what's going to happen next. The build up to each chapter is suspenseful- making this a binge-worthy story. Also you can tell the author has done her research, the tone of writing, language and characters build the military scenes, making it very believable. "

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I Can't Wait for More

"Your writing flowed so nicely, and I could never really predict what was about to happen. I have always read books where people are really fast with the plot hooks, and I am so happy that there is suspense build up, and I am curious about what is going to happen next! Your characters are all so distinctive, and each of them brings their own mystery and intrigue. Just wow! I can't wait to read more!"

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hshska

"the first thing you should be doing is to get a good job on the first job and you wwill wget it and the next thing you’ll know is that you’re going through "

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