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Chess Plays

"A very enticing tale of two people in desperate need of each other. Often or usually, we are not aware of what we need or how our missing parts will be brought into the light from within ourselves with the mirror of another. While I loved the grammatical correctness of this story, the punctuation and typos (very few) needed a final check. I see the characters as assertive and passive, both being affected by each other as the tale progresses, bringing out their light. The ending promising a good and healthy life together, Kudos to the author. who created an excellent piece of work."

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Really decent read

"Not bad but sold app for lit but lives in crappy apartment??? Also he has yet to say how he feelss....."

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Soo realistic it's almost too good to be true.

"Most romance novels, hallmark movies and romcoms have a plot that are typically too bad to be true. This one was almost too good to be true - so so almost that it sits firmly in reality. A brilliant read with all the right ingredients. Thank you author. "

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The Bad Boy and The Bet

"Really good story. Unexpected character in Mia. The plot line was good between the heavy sex scenes. A good balance of both. The family dynamic for Wes was refreshing. Impressive for your 1st submission. "

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awesome

"i am excited reading this story "

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The bad boy & the bet

"Had to read it all in one go love it 🥰"

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The bad boy and the bet

"Was one of the greatest books I have read in a while. Absolutely Inlove with this plot the characters and everything In between. Needs a part 2 honestly."

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The Bad Boy and the Bet

"This was a really sweet read!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Loved it!!

"Very well written short story. Amazing characters. Loved every bit of it. Looking forward reading more of your work. "

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