The Zodiac Veils- The Thirteeth Sign

"Well, well, well! I'm so glad to have stumbled upon another Zodiac sign-based story! I'm so overjoyed right now. So far, I've yet to read the rest of the story and I'm not sure if these reviews are supposed to be done at the end of the story, but I want to say that I loved it. The start was so mysterious, attention-gripping, suspenseful, and all of this without revealing too much. Your writing style is very entertaining and I love how the pace suits the type of story this is very well and how you take the time to set the mood and introduce the characters without being in a rush. The dialogue was great- it brings the characters more depth- and the overall composition of this write is stellar. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more and this will definitely be on my reading list. One thing I would suggest that you fix is the quotation marks you use for the dialogue (they are the wrong ones) and the spelling mistakes (nothing major). Well done on this! I'm loving this! -IceWinifredd"