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Beneath the silence
"Great plot, awesome characters and seems pretty close to our politicians/legal nightmare we currently have in charge. Keep up the great writing "
AI written, Human assisted
"Realism is thrown out in the first chapter. Then again multiple times per chapter there after. Inconsistent. From walking into a house, to suddenly looking out an apartment window. This story is all over the place, doesn't always make sense in dialog. Immersion is impossible with its inconsistencies and unrealistic actions. Very obviously AI heavy with the amount of errors in writing, yet not in spelling, grammar, or punctuation. Would Not Recommend!"
