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Absolutely hooked from the start!

"I’ve genuinely loved every single chapter so far—the pacing, the descriptions, the characters—everything has kept me hooked throughout! The writing flows effortlessly, pulling me in deeper with each scene, and the way the setting, characters, and their interactions are described really brings the story to life. Top-tier storytelling! The plot is so fresh and gripping—Clover getting sent off to a so-called “summer camp” that’s newly turned into a Gay conversion facility even though she keeps saying she’s not even gay! It’s emotional, intriguing, and totally unlike anything I’ve read before. Clover’s such a well-written character—I connected with her right away, and I’m so curious to find out what really happened with her older brother. Sampson, her boyfriend, is just the sweetest. He’s such a warm and genuine character, a total comfort to read. Meanwhile, Brooklyn (Sampson’s ex and Clover’s so-called friend) I’d seriously rather have no friends than deal with someone like her! Then there’s Gustav—Sampson’s best friend and camp counselor—who has this quiet, mysterious aura. I’m dying to know his full story. And Juniper… she seems super friendly and bubbly, but I get the feeling she’s hiding something. Her sister’s backstory has me equally curious. Overall, this story is incredibly gripping. The characters feel real, the plot has layers, and the emotional depth is so well done. I’m excited to keep reading and genuinely looking forward to what comes next! "

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Compelling Story

"I’m really enjoying this story so far! The premise is compelling—following a girl who’s sent to a camp to “turn her straight,” even though she insists she isn’t gay, adds such an emotional and thought-provoking layer to the plot. It’s written in a way that keeps me curious about what’s really going on beneath the surface. I really like the character Sam—he seems like a solid presence and adds a lot to the story. Gus is still a bit of a mystery, but I think I’ll grow to like him more as things unfold. I’m still unsure how I feel about Jupiter, but I’m definitely intrigued to see what their role is in all of this. Also, I really want to know what happened to Clover’s brother—that little mystery has me hooked. There are a few minor grammar issues here and there, but nothing that takes away from the overall experience. I’m excited to keep reading!"

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