Graceland 101

"I would have liked to read a precise summary of the 3 stories in the beginning to keep the readers in the loop of what was going to happen in brief. The plot was building up with the different POVs leaving me guessing what was going to happen next. The writing style was good except for some grammatical errors which can be improved. The dialogues should be in inverted commas. As this story is a work in progress, I would like to read more."