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Gripping characters!

"I can't wait to read more of this story! The MC is just trouble with a capital T, and I'm looking forward to see him get the support he needs even if I bet he won't be keen on it at first. One thing I'd give some attention to in editing is spreading out the info about people's looks so it doesn't feel like infodumping."

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winters father

"Absolotue cinema. That's all that needs to be said."

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