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Ausura Phoenix

"Really good story I Ike this very much great characters and epic plot.I can't wait for more ! Get writing Author ! Thanks for sharing good job peace"

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Asura Pheonix

"I wouldn't normally read a story of this genre, however, I found it extremely compelling. the beginning was written in a way that makes the reader want to continue to find out what is going on. I found the use of descriptions enabled me as the reader to picture the scene clearly. I found the writing was excellent. no negatives and would be more than happy to read more chapters. "

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