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I am engrossed...

"The author has an incredible gift in use of words to describe settings. At times text/story is very confusing. I am invested in Alice at this point. I continue reading for her. "

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Fantastic read!

"I enjoyed reading this story. The way the author describes places and people is just amazing! Felt I was there at times! Well done to the author :) *I actually read all the chapters, I don't know why it is saying 40. (edited)"

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Amazing

"This was a well written story full of legends, fate, good vs evil, and all that jazz.... it has a little of everything."

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The Queen that never was

"It was a great story, just lacked romance on it."

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To read, to feel, to exist

"When you find a story that treats werewolves as part of a larger, ancient tapestry-rather than just lovesick monsters-it transforms the reading experience from a simple scary story into a true epic. ​The Queen That Never Was is worth every single minute. When every page leaves such a mark that the story stays with you even after a long break, you realize that time cannot erase the myth the author so skillfully builds. It transports you into a magical realm where you travel through the depths of your own psyche; you stop, you see, you feel, you know, and you simply exist. ​If you haven't joined this incredible journey yet, what are you waiting for? Dive into this adventure of words and letters—the author has ensured there isn't a single dull moment. Come and join the story. "

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Unique

"I love the fact that this book is unique in its own right. I can’t wait for part 2 ❤️❤️"

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The queen that never was

"This book was a unique style of story ! I can't wait to see how the sequel is! The characters are awesome with how they grow and change."

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Captivating Writing

"Though it can be a little verbose at times, the writing is really captivating. It's very emotional and intense. And very poetic at times!"

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To many unanswered everything

"No end to the turmoil, too much left unsaid. "

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Simply Amazing!

"Your talent has me spellbound, your descriptions, in such detail, painted a new world for me. The character development, the plot/subplots have me hanging on every word. Thank you for sharing your superb talent with us! I can't wait for the next update, the anticipation is intense!"

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I should have looked at how many chapters there were.

"I would have not began reading it. I hate cliffhangers. Now I don’t know if I want to pursue it or not. "

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The queen that never was

"Everything My siblings It worth it"

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Enjoyable

"Really enjoying the plot, and the writing style is great. Sometimes the names change slightly e.g Rael Raen which trips me up."

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The Queen That Never Was

"Aside from my thoughts on chapter 1, and the fact that this is an ongoing story, great plot over all. Kept me hooked! I enjoy your writing style. I wonder where your imagination will take you next, I'm curious. Great job! Keep at it!"

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BEWARE There's a 2nd Book but it cost $

"This book ends leaving you wanting to read the 2nd one so you see how things play out, BEWARE 2nd book only goes to 3 chapters and then requires you to pay & subscribe in order to read the rest. So by reading this story you will be left wondering what happens without ever knowing unless you wish to pay."

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Splendid writing style

"There is just something about the author's way of writing that is just captivating, from the sentences to their depth. A great author you are! Carry on!!"

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Great First Chapter

"I cannot write fantasy to save my life. I love the concept here. Great first chapter. "

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