Inkitt
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Glass heart

"Brilliant read although sad at the abuse really intrigued to see if she finds her father and hope that she finds the peace that she so deserves "

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Cute story

"I love a cute regression story. It’s not done but so far it’s so cute and enjoyable to read. I like the low drama and how quickly the ageregression is included. The beginning is like really messed up but it’s only for one chapter. The rest of the chapters are better and don’t have like active trauma IN the plot. But but but, it’s AI assisted. Which like, yeah, I guess if you need help writing a story you can use AI but it feels like it’s not the writer writing it, it’s the AI thing or app. I could tell right way since it has so many of the emdash things and the writing had no grammar or variance issues. Like it was just a string of perfect sentences that even published story’s don’t have. But it’s cute and worth the read. "

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