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Expected not less

"I have read several shorts stories from Rick Haynes, including his series of drabbles and I expected this one to be as good as the others. I was not disappointed. I like the eerie feeling of the beginning and the suspense. But I love more the little twist at the end. Well done."

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Another compelling story

"I am a fan of Rick Haynes and his writing. He has a way of capturing the attention and drawing the reader in without giving away any of the twists and turns, which he has many, before their time. I was fascinated with this story and when I reached the end all I could think was " I want more". Well done Rick!"

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