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I love it!

"I love the story!! I’d purchase this on my Kindle. Dragon lore is always so interesting. The story around it makes it even more so. Keep writing, so I can keep reading!!"

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Fated Flames

"Overall good plot... the romance moved slower than I would like, but the characters are well developed"

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Love this so much

"This is amazing!! I love the story and the all the characters. I can’t stop reading!"

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Kiss

"It’s about time he kisses her "

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Liken is BAD!!!

"Liken is such a schemer!! I’m not sure why Tilly is enamored with him! I hope Sereh and Soren both find out he is greasy!!!"

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Good plot & characters; short sections books make it choppy

"Great concepts and characterization. While I understand this app, and Vella, are about short sections, to my reading the story suffers under that format. It results in rough, obvious foreshadowing that could be developed into full-throttle romantacy. It would also help to get more glimpses into key side characters. I think it would be a shame to lose such effective world development by not including glimpses into the other potential stories (Rosa, Tally, Lord Lyken, I really want to read Marta's WHOLE story). The seeds of something incredible such as Robin Hobb's series around Fitz, the Dragon ships, and the Golden Fool are here. I'd love to see--and stay up all night to read--these volumes evolved into that kind of series. It's been fun to read V1&2. And I'm certain this could be an engrossing, huge series. "

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