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This is getting good

"Very good one . But whew, Merri and Matt ugh!"

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Got that ass beat.

"I love how he got his ass beat. Wish they could finished the job. But he already feeling bad about this. And once max finds out she going be upset. He should went to her instead not saying anything ."

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Good

"Matt, he got what he deserved. Maxine is standing up to the delusional man-child, I don’t blame her at all."

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