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Great story

"Wow, hot stuff, more please😄"

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"It's very interesting "

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Eye opening

"I love this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. It is an awesome look into Leo all grown up. This love story is about to change and I can't wait"

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Good

"Good story so far "

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Leo Leo Leo

"This is intriguing "

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wonderfull explanation

"Hey! The tension between Ava’s vulnerability and Leonardo’s cold dominance feels like the foundation for a gripping dark romance. Have you ever thought about turning this into an ebook for Kindle readers?"

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Absolutely love it

"It’s a great read! It’s passionate, slow burn, and a lot of sexual tension and heat between them, it’s perfect! I’d definitely recommend it for anyone who’s into passion. I love the continuation from Mafia’s obsession, so far it’s a great read and can’t wait to read more! + Grammar and writing is on point! "

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Vows of Vengence

"I felt like the story could have moved faster. Her character doesn't make sense to me. She's a smart woman. A doctor. Defiant. Goes see her family, meets her friends for drinks yet sits around the mansion all day. I don't think her character would actually do that."

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