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Shattering her Illusions

"Loved this book and the HEA"

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Dillon ❤️ Charlie

"My heart absolutely broke for both of them from the beginning, yeah Dillon was a jerk but I know they were both hurting, I’m proud of the strength she showed by walking away and not letting him get away with it and I’m proud of him actually taking it what people were telling him and looking inside himself to discover his own truths and then doing what he needed to become better for himself. Sometimes finding away forward isn’t about walking away from that person forever but from finding the strength to find forgiveness for that person and working on a better future together. Bliss deserved every bit of what she got, I still believe Callum should have been knocked out. "

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Shattered illusion

"Great flow of the story line. Doesn't feel rushed. Love the organic evolution of the character's and how they grow as a person. Thank you 👍🏼 it's hard to find decent good follow on to read books. Especially ones where the novel seems to drag on into insane amount of chapters. "

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Her shattered illusions

"Loved the story. The characters were human and believable, not perfect, just like in real life. Good journey to redemption. "

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Great Love Story

"I enjoyed this story. The characters were well-rounded. "

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So far great book!

"This book so far is amazing just wish the updates were more frequent "

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Enjoying this!

"I’m enjoying the quiet strength that Charlie has brewing, and Dillon is slowly realising that not even is he complicit in tearing her down, he actively does it on his own. I don’t want her to forget what he’s done, I think forgiveness is the best sign of moving on. I have all the feels for Charlie and want to MURDER Dillon and even Marisa for lying or “omitting”. Great storyline. Keep up the excellent work!"

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Just started and couldn’t put it down

"I came across this story after seeing the authors posts on a FB page over the weekend and I was not let down. I could not stop reading this story and can not wait for the next update. I like Dillon’s growth and I am wondering what is going on with Marissa. I kinda want to know what the heck Callum was thinking, but most of all I like seeing Charlie standing up for herself and growing into a person who sees and values herself, but more importantly fights for herself. "

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