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The weight of owning another’s heart

"So many battles, all the while choosing each other over every thing else. Trust is a beautiful thing but to truly embrace it takes strength. This is a hard won love story. ❤️"

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Great storyline

"I really enjoyed the storyline and the characters. I found it a bit wordy in some places and sometimes quite repetitive but the writing itself is good. I felt it was a bit jumpy in spots and I would have loved more back story on both Lilian and Cash. The concept is great but I think it would benefit from a bit more story between disasters. Thank you and well done 🤗"

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Action packed!

"More people should read this one! Love the dark, gritty tone- and lots of action. The main characters were great- raw, passionate, and tough. The words and descriptors, while they were well chosen for the most part and good in setting that tone, could sometimes feel repetitive or contradictory. There were points were I was confused about what time period we were in or how much time had passed. This is also SUPER fast paced; it's perfect for people that like that rapid-fire action. I personally was so fascinated by the major plot points that I felt it actually needed to slow down or even be broken up into more stories to focus on these awesome antagonists and plot/relationship hurdles that were introduced and overcome in quick succession. "

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