What is your opinion?
Nice job
"Hysterically funny with a pinch of seriousness and suspense loved it. Great work. What’s next?"
Amazing
"This story is so good. I love it! The riting style is good. I love all the imagery it makes you feel there. I can't ware for it to be finished, know it will be good!"
Mystic University
"So far so good!"
Mystic University
"Hi! I really liked the tone of this story, it is sometimes a little disjointed and runs too fast in some areas. Overall, great story, great characters and I hope there will be a follow-up. Thank you 🤗"
Mystic university
"There's a great plot in there.... Somewhere, but there is far too much information missing. It says in the story near the end that Bella had been learning how to lead for years, also, how does she know the Sealie Queen? And in the last chapter the girls the talk about what their second year at university will bring. Over all it ended up rather confusing. Also when the Dean said that the king killed her mother but in the final battle he showed her a memory. This is all I can think of now. But a rewrite and more information and even if it turns into a series even better.dontvgive up you clearly got great ideas "
Imagery overload
"The story ( which I’m assuming is not finished) has potential but the overwhelming amount of imagery is casting a shadow on the overall story. Get more dialogue and character development in there with less of the description of the scene. Keep going! "
