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Crazy

"This story did not just entertain me—it infected my brain. I was reading it at work, at home, in the shower (don’t ask), and I still feel like I haven’t absorbed everything it has to offer. It’s one of those experiences where you finish a chapter and you just sit there staring at your screen like, ‘Did that really just happen?’ The emotional whiplash is delicious. Every character is either someone I would die for or someone I would kill for, and sometimes both in the same paragraph. And don’t even get me started on the atmosphere. The atmosphere. It's like being caught in a thunderstorm with glitter in the rain. It’s chaotic, it’s unrelenting, and it doesn’t apologize for a single thing. If you like your stories with morally ambiguous icons, cryptic foreshadowing, and the occasional spiritual crisis, this one's for you."

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Too Great

"I don’t even know where to begin with this story because, quite frankly, it took me on an emotional rollercoaster I wasn’t prepared for. From the very first paragraph, I felt something shift inside me—like my soul recognized something it had been missing. The pacing was wild in the best way, and the way the narrative just flows? It’s like listening to your favorite song on repeat, but every time you hear it, there’s a new lyric that hits differently. And the girls? Oh my god. The girls. I wanted to wrap them in blankets and feed them soup and also maybe let them punch me in the face. Absolute icons. I didn’t even care what they were doing half the time; I just wanted to be with them. The dialogue felt like overhearing a conversation in a dream you vaguely remember but can’t stop thinking about. If you’re looking for something that doesn’t make sense until it does, and then never stops making sense, this is it."

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god i loved it

"you can see the raw passion in the writing this writer has a idea and is trying go get it nothing but respect from me and he might be a small writer and i am too he got ideas this guy also put this story in PG for children wow"

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Hard to Hate

"loved the plot sure its not everyone cup of tea but for a guy doing this as a hobby you cant lie its damn fine start hopefully that 2nd book comes out itching for more hardcore we need art of Amane and Yuka!"

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