What is your opinion?
Love love this
"I personally love love this book! Would mind writing another as this was great. Keep up the good goddamn work"
Loved this....
"While overall this book was amazing. The details in this book were more than I expected. Most do not get detailed like this with one character, let-alone more than four characters. You have a great writing style, you have great attention to detail. The only thing I had an issue with was punctuation and a few grammar mistakes. But I love reading a raw unedited story. I believe a raw unedited story that is published shows more about the author than an edited story. My favorite thing about your story is the attention to detail with each couple, even with Amy in chapter I think it was six and seven with the cabin. She may have been just a side character a throw away character but the details were great. Jasmine and her mates, Mark and his Mates love and passion for one another. It hit. You could really feel it. Now just edit it, and turn it into a world wide best seller. I think that's what you have on your hands here, if I am being honest. "
New Chapter release day.
"On which day we expect a new chapter relese?"
Intriguing
"I’ve only read the first chapter so far but I like how it opens and the style of writing, inserting yourself as first person but so far not a part of the story, is unique. I hope the rest of the story matches the first chapter!"
Great read
"Fun ideas with good characters. Story has a good flow and if you are into thriller novels it will be perfect"
There’s no waiting for the good stuff, love that!
"The story is a fast-paced, horny, and chaotic ride! The author immediately pulls you in with lush descriptions that help you visualise the story like a movie. The abundance of characters, main and side, keeps the reader engaged, and curious as to what happens next. And yes, it’s filthy 🌶️🔥 not just the main couples, either. It reminds me of those eighties horror movies. The ones that took place at some summer camp, everyone’s fucking, then everyone starts screaming. And not in a pleasurable way 😂 but we haven’t gotten to that kind of terror in this story. There’s many relatable moments, too. It’s funny, irreverent, and with a subtle background baseline that builds a bit of dread. Because you know shits gonna hit the fan at some stage. But until then, we fuck, we joke, we laugh! And I think that’s healthy 😌 Excited to see where the author goes with this. Well done 🥰❤️"
A really well thought out good read
"The story from the beginning to the end moved along at a good, steady pace. The characters were well-thought-out and well-rounded, exploring their personalities and lifestyles. The plot, with its many turns mixed in, followed a good line that kept you looking for the divergence in the story. Overall, the story is really well written, but I felt that it ended a little too abruptly. Would love to see a continuation or a few POVs from different perspectives to explore the conclusion further."
I like the perspective shift
"The way it started and shifted to the main character’s perspective was pretty cool. Fun style!"
Intense!
"There’s something bold and cinematic about the way you open — the scene pulls no punches, and the pace doesn’t let up. Your voice is definitely unique, and it’s always fascinating to see the different ways writers bring intensity to the page. I’m new to Inkitt and just released my debut, Just This Once — a bit softer, more emotionally messy than explosive. If you ever feel like wandering into the quiet side of chaos, I’d love your thoughts. "
Love love, the idea behind the characters.#plasticsurgery
"I like the characters that's for sure.definatlyi'willrecomendthisbooktomysiz, she would love it,wat can I say, so far so good."
